Vivian

That's so sad. :.(

Thanks. That looks like something I would do since I always end up repeating things.

Alright, thanks. I kind of grew up thinking poems didn't have periods and over the years I realized I was wrong but never thought to fix it. :(

I'm so sorry.

Srry about that I sometimes misspell that word. I rewrote it it's called Prologue(Edited version). Thnx for reviewing you'll see a lot of differences if you read the edit

Thanks. I'll try.

Thank you. I only called it prologue because at some point I was planning to name it but nothing came to mind. :)

Nice story very intense and detailed. I think I'm already following you. Why doesn't the mother do something about her husband and her son? She's an awful mother for just ...

Thanks for the reply I'll work on it. By the way it is a garden she knows it's a garden but only vaguely I'll republish this after the edits. :)

Hey Leo this story is dramatic and very poetic like. A few of the lines hold a deeper context or meaning that I can't pin point. It sounds like the ...

hey this is the second poem I've read by you. I can't say I'm shocked because the title says it all. Nice poem and I have no right to say ...

Sup another Plaguer. I like your poem it's lovely but how was he forced away to a place where she was. Wasn't he wishing to find her at the beginning? ...

I like this poem it's very serene and has a sing song joy to it. (I don't know what the means though :}) Can he not visit her again in ...

Gosh Andorra's got some rage issues and she wonders why she's not liked. _' ' -- This sounds like it'll be a very interesting story and thank goodness I can ...

I will like I said I wanna see how the world plays out. "- ;]