Vivian

Heellooo, Vivian here to review. I have decided to break out of my usual reviewing style for this chapter with the most interesting and mysterious name. I will still start ...

Patriotism can sometimes be a double edged sword as well, so can trust. Hey, Viv here to do a review. First, I love this story so much. Second, why couldn't ...

Hello, your pal Vivian here. For once, I have no mistakes to point out and I was pretty interested in this Devin guy. What a cute relationship they have, but ...

Hey Sharrae, I am so glad that the fourth chapter is out. I feel like we are finally getting some answers. So as I have done for my last few ...

Hey Viv here to review. (If only I made it first). So as usual I will start of with a few nitpicks and then give you your praise. 1. "Waiting ...

Viv Here. I guess this is sort of uplifting. But I feel it needs more, unless you are trying to say more with less. If you are, then its great ...

Hey, Viv here for a review. Let's start with nitpicks. 1. "No matter hold old, she’d tell ‘Come sit on mommy’s lap.’" -I think you probably meant to put "how ...

Well, to answer the underlying question of this poem I think it's just because we are human, we are living beings, and its just what we do. I just don't ...

Okay, I'm not going to lie, this whole letter made me tear up a little. I have absolutely nothing to critique about because I honestly believe it is a great ...

I like it, and the title really helps to understand the general sense of what is going on. But I am slightly confused. Firstly, did Donna fall of the branch? ...

Hey Morrigan, because I see nothing wrong with this poem and think it is wonderful, I'll just try and interpret what it means. Firstly, i don't get the difference between ...

Hey, Viv here to do a review. First of all, great poem. I really liked it. I find it amazing that you kept up the whole contradicting paradox theme for ...

Well, Dream, what can I say? This poem is amazing. It's so thoughtful and deep and somber. In a good way though. It also reminded me of something one would ...

Hey, Widdershins. (Sorry in advance if this is an unhelpful review, I'm rusty). Your poem is great, really thoughtful and thought provoking. Everything I read made me feel like you ...

Firstly, welcome to the site (though I'm three days late). Secondly, this is a wonderful poem, its sound like a ballad and something Shakespeare would never be able to do ...