Vivian

What's her name? What's her name? Hey there, Viv here to do a review. Maybe. I don't see much wrong with this story except for the intense cliff hanger and ...

I'm sorry but I don't see any reason to change this. It's perfect to me even without knowing the background information and I'm sure the whole story would be even ...

Hey, Viv here to do a review. For one thing, I really love this poem. It's got a nice flow, great similes and manages to be very descriptive of your ...

Personally I don't think there's anything wrong with this short so this might just be a review telling you all about how great this story is. But first, I'm confused, ...

Hey Viv here to rip this apart. First off, great opening lines. It was really attention grabbing. Secondly, nnnoooo, why a library? Wh-hy? *Ahem.* Anyhow, I'll give you the nitpicks ...

Viv here to attempt a decent review. Alright, this is a great poem, beautifully written and well thought out. I may or may not understand the deeper meaning too. I'll ...

Viv here to do a review. First off, I love this story. It was so nice and simple but with a deep meaning to it. The characters were described well ...

Viv here to do a review. I don't see much wrong this poem, personally I like how deep it is. It's detailed but at the same time a bit vague, ...

Well this is kind of sad, but it made me wonder what the narrator was going through. Considering he said in the beginning of the poem the things he traded ...

Hey it's Viv here, and I will now be attempting a review. So I've just reread the poem, still can't find anything wrong with it. It's your fault for writing ...

First of all, I just want to say this is a great poem, whether you read the regular lines separately and the italicized lines separately or you read it all ...

Wow, all I can say is wow. Viv here to remind you of how great a poet you are. ;) I love this poem, it's great, and I honestly don't ...

Hey there, Annaclare. Love this poem, I really do. It flows well and I get what you're saying but it could be better. For one thing, you start off great ...

Viv here, nice to meet you. For the most part I honestly don't see anything wrong with this poem. I agree with Ezzi01, this is insightful, well worded, and it ...

Hey There Sharrae,BellaRoma beat me to first review but that's alright for now. Back to the old routine. I'm glad you put the flashback in italics this time, though most ...