Vivian

I want out start off first by saying I would really like to meet Desmond, Emanuel and Evan in real life. There's not much people like them in the world ...

Hi again, Desmond needs to work on talking himself out of things. There was very convincing lie he could have told Luanne but I like the one he told the ...

Definitely funny especially the last part. Adam seems like a real smart attic but I can't blame him that is almost the strangest question I've heard for a test even ...

To be honest the title hooked me because I also see difference as a good thing because wouldn't it be just so boring and creepy if we were all the ...

This is a nice poem it's a little cheesy but still nice. Now in the lines where it reads You make me laugh, when it’s cold like winter. Do you ...

This is a very soothing poem that tells the writer the reader is saying "We can always start anew". It's late on a Saturday so I have to say it ...

Okay hello, I read I want to Be Punished No More Daddy(long title) and I thought these two things would be connected. The genre is though. I started reading it ...

Gosh it really brings you into the insight of bugs when we catch them. I say this a lot but it was great and romantic. I can't really put this ...

I like how you hook the reader right off the bat with the broken sentences the character is hearing. It starts off the suspense of the story that instantly makes ...

When I read the blur I thought "This sounds like Percy Jackson" (sorta-ish) Desmond sounds like a real pessimist especially with his outlook on the human raise considering he is ...

I'm not trying to be mean but the first thing I thought when I read the title was love is blind. It's a good poem and sounds so romantic, extravagant. ...

I like your blur for this poem it's funny. But besides that this is a great poem. At first I thought you were having some conflict with marriage and now ...