Vivian

Hey, Viv here to do a review. Let me just say that I love this poem. You do enjambment very well so the flow is smooth, and the word choice ...

Viv here to give a review. Firstly, lovely poem. It manages to encompass childhood wonder and the learning of new things from young to old. I like how you set ...

Hey, Viv here to do a review. So, this is beautiful, always a fan of space and celestial objects. Your title is a great hook and your first line really ...

Woo, you go. Viv here to comment. First off, congrats, your first upload and welcome. Second off, love the piece. It's real, it's relatable, and it flows well. I can't ...

Hey Viv here to do a review, I wish I wrote poems in third grade. I like it, it's great. Think of it like Picasso wishing to paint like a ...

Impactful. Hey, Viv here to do a review! Wow, lovely use of enjambment when you did use it. There were enough visuals to form a clear picture in the mind. ...

Hey, Viv here to do a review. Holy shit, that was intense. No really, I already love this girl, she's easy to relate to and perfectly encompasses the confusion of ...

Viv here to give a review. So firstly, thanks for sharing this with us and I'm sorry your dog died. Your poem was very beautiful and shows your growth as ...

Viv here, for hopefully a review. Well damn. What can I say except I love it. It's truly a wonderful read. I don't know if this is a good or ...

Viv, here to give you a review. The beginning was thoughtful and drawing, the ending was nice and smooth and still thought provoking. Honestly this was great. You were philosophical, ...

Hey there, Vivian here. So I don't really see anything that needs to be changed. Your wording works, your descriptions are beautiful, and the poem holds that serene and calm ...

Viv, here to do a review for you. I love this poem, it had a nice flow, certain words rhymed where they needed to rhyme. It gave off a peaceful ...

Viv here to do a review. Welp, it is a microstory and could easily be a poem. I like it, you did not disappoint. But now I'm confused, if their ...

Hey there, Viv here. And boy is this a nice story. Shriken is a dragon right? Dragons have paws? Anyways, I think the story was great, doesn't really have anything ...

Lmao, I love the friend's jokes. Honestly I see nothing wrong with this story and genuinely like it it. It's great as an "On it's own story" but I don't ...