Virgil

I'm not saying it's all bad, Songmorning, I rather just felt that the "Moon, stars/fire, wind/" lines and all the like could have been improved with more sort of explanation. ...

Scratch that, Rydia and Fox basically said all my thoughts on it >>

If I don't end up reviewing this after school, remind me or something.

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This is a poem from nearly a year ago, and I was referring to the planets in the poem, I hate the poem anyway, so that's why it doesn't really ...

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Thanks for the review, but poetry doesn't necessarily have to have a rhyme scheme or anything of that sort.

New lines can also indicate breaths without punctuation, haha, it's not like you'd read it aloud all in one line, because it isn't all in one line.

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Thank you!

I'm glad you enjoy it! ^^

Thank you so much!

This was more of a rant about how people saying how much america sucks and how I'm tired of hearing it so I made this ^^

thanks for the review.