Virgil

Thank you for the review, it was very helpful!

First note, not all the letters have to be capitalized and it personally annoys me when they are this way because it's confusing on the eyes when a line starts ...

Thanks for the review. The repetition was actually intentional, and I intend to keep it that way. The use of 'I' was also a bit intentional and I do intend ...

Thanks for the review.

I'll have to come back to review this because I have some notes I want to leave.

Thank you!

Thank you for the review! It totes made sense, and I noticed most of the things you brought up while mentioning them soo c:

Just because you don't like poetry doesn't mean you get a free pass and D:< There's always room to improve!

I understand a little better now of what you meant. The clarity of the poem is more what I was talking about with the theme and it felt a little ...

Some simple things like "dark" and the description of the planet could be or have a bit more. More about the homerise and homelight, tell us more about them. The ...

I envy you for being so good at poetry and I also love it because you're so good at poetry.

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review, 300 points coming your way! :3 Thank you for trying to read this and all ^^

My editing must suck at the moment, because I edited the crap out of this. I think my problem is, is that I do it all at once, all the ...

A few questions for the review because there were some things I didn't quite understand or some things that I wanted to ask: 1) What is communing with my poetic ...