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Virgil

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: 3:00am cliffs

    Thanks for the review!

    Mar 31, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Ascension: Corso 33 (The Myriad book 1)

    Awesome! c:

    Jan 28, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Frozen Girl

    I'm glad!

    Jan 11, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Humor, Other Re: cliché yws story

    Ohhh, I get that, haha. :p

    Jan 10, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: My Elysium

    I didn't identify the form initially--maybe add that into the description or an Author's Note! Thanks for letting me know though!

    Jan 8, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: at the funeral

    Thanks for letting me know! That definitely helps clarify those two things. c:

    Oct 2, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: •-• • -••• • -•-• -•-• •- (Rebecca)

    Ahh, that makes more sense! Thanks for the clarification. :3

    Sep 30, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: She Said

    Ahhh! That makes more sense.

    Sep 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Nervous Bones

    Structured poetry is optional and because this is free-verse, I don't follow any guidelines as to how many lines are in each stanza. Thanks for the suggestion with the changing ...

    Sep 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Nervous Bones

    Grammarly is wrong on this one! The word 'than' with an a is correct since the definition of that is 'used in expression introducing an exception or contrast'. I personally ...

    Sep 24, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: autumnal equinox

    OOPS. I went to read their poem and brought their name over to the poem I was reviewing here. xD Sorry about that, Lupa!

    Sep 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: That part of me was strangled

    That does help, yep!

    Sep 18, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: Voices In My Head: Chapter 1

    Ooh, that definitely helps! Thanks for the explanation.

    Sep 17, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 16.1

    Yeah, that'd help! :3

    Sep 15, 2017
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Showing and Telling - How to Tell Effectively

    Ah, your good telling example specifically with the amount of commas and generally there's room for rewording there. I get the idea of what you're attempting to do but I'm ...

    Sep 12, 2017


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