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Re: 3:00am cliffs
Thanks for the review!
Mar 31, 2018 -
Re: Ascension: Corso 33 (The Myriad book 1)
Awesome! c:
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: A Frozen Girl
I'm glad!
Jan 11, 2018 -
Re: cliché yws story
Ohhh, I get that, haha. :p
Jan 10, 2018 -
Re: My Elysium
I didn't identify the form initially--maybe add that into the description or an Author's Note! Thanks for letting me know though!
Jan 8, 2018 -
Re: at the funeral
Thanks for letting me know! That definitely helps clarify those two things. c:
Oct 2, 2017 -
Re: •-• • -••• • -•-• -•-• •- (Rebecca)
Ahh, that makes more sense! Thanks for the clarification. :3
Sep 30, 2017 -
Re: She Said
Ahhh! That makes more sense.
Sep 25, 2017 -
Re: Nervous Bones
Structured poetry is optional and because this is free-verse, I don't follow any guidelines as to how many lines are in each stanza. Thanks for the suggestion with the changing ...
Sep 25, 2017 -
Re: Nervous Bones
Grammarly is wrong on this one! The word 'than' with an a is correct since the definition of that is 'used in expression introducing an exception or contrast'. I personally ...
Sep 24, 2017 -
Re: autumnal equinox
OOPS. I went to read their poem and brought their name over to the poem I was reviewing here. xD Sorry about that, Lupa!
Sep 23, 2017 -
Re: That part of me was strangled
That does help, yep!
Sep 18, 2017 -
Re: Voices In My Head: Chapter 1
Ooh, that definitely helps! Thanks for the explanation.
Sep 17, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 16.1
Yeah, that'd help! :3
Sep 15, 2017 -
Re: Showing and Telling - How to Tell Effectively
Ah, your good telling example specifically with the amount of commas and generally there's room for rewording there. I get the idea of what you're attempting to do but I'm ...
Sep 12, 2017