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Re: Ascension: Corso 13 (The Myriad book 1)
This is Nikayla here dropping in for another review on Review Day! I understand now that these chapters have different perspectives, and this one is in the perspective of Corso. ...
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Re: Gardens of Eden: Chapter 1: Part 3
This is Nikayla here hopping in for a review on Review Day! Damon--clever name. I'm actually a fan of what you name your characters in this novel and how you ...
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Re: Ascension: Nyx 15 (The Myriad book 1)
This is Nikayla here jumping in for a review! I noticed the same as Ink with this having pacing that's too quick for my liking. The reader doesn't get time ...
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Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 20 (Space Fights, Space Bikes)
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review and silly read on Review Day. I have to agree with BlueAfrica with the whole dialogue tag thing. There's a large ...
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Re: Equivalent Worlds - Chapter Seven
Bark bark. I'm back for another review this Review Day! So this chapter is a lot more interesting than the last one reviewed and by that you've shown me that ...
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Re: Equivalent Worlds - Chapter Eight
Hi there, Scarli, Kayla here jumping in for a review on Review Day! Let's jump right into the chapter with saying that I didn't think this was EW at all. ...
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Re: cyberpunk test number whotheheckknows
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So this is pretty clever, though I think a neater or more cohesive title would bring in more of an audience ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: The Prince of Ackerly Shade Chapter 1 Part 1
Nikayla here jumping in for a review! I'm not too sure on what understanding I have of the place of Ackerly Shade, which seems like one of the main settings ...
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Re: Why everyone should pull all-nighters
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review. I have to agree with Hannah that the reasons of this being in the Green Room for so long are because ...
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Re: Ambitions
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! This sure is a child with ambitions. The main aspect of the poem that I find a little concerning or unrealistic, ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Thumbed Out Words
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! The first aspect that I noticed about the piece is that the first stanza is a bit longer than the others, ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: NaPo 2017 Entry 3: Unique
This is Nikayla here dropping in for another review! So, the one before Summertime Memories, which still holds to be my favorite of the NaPo poems that you've posted so ...
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Re: What Happens
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! The first aspect of the poem that I noticed is that you decided to capitalize the first letter of every line. ...
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Re: I Am Fairly Sure I Am A Reincarnation Of Guy Fawkes' Hidden Fear of Fire
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So, somebody has to review this. You can see that everyone else was shaking in their boots to review this piece ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: There's So Much More To Juno Blackwood: chapter 1
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! There are a couple of paragraphs here that could be broken up into smaller ones. At points, they become blocks of ...
Apr 30, 2017