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Re: Recipe for the perfect slice of toast
I have to say, I am dissatisfied with this recipe. I was enjoying it until step 5. I don’t know if you realized that you made a racist joke, but ...
Aug 1, 2020 -
Re: Christian Girls
Hey @Tuckster! VioletFantasy here to review your poetry. I enjoyed this piece quite a lot! It really shows how women are suppressed by men through religion. “ I see the ...
Aug 1, 2020 -
Re: sinking
Hey Via! I’d like to review this very relatable poem you wrote. Your choice of words throughout the poem gave it a relaxed and peaceful tone. I felt myself wishing ...
Jul 30, 2020 -
Re: Lockheed : The Voice Of the Unheard
Hello! I’d love to review this heart wrenching story you wrote. I am so glad you have decided to use your writing skills to send such an important message out ...
Jul 29, 2020 -
Re: The daughter of lack-love and cruelty
Hi Beautifulsparkle! I’d like to review this wonderful fanfic chapter. I’m a Potterhead as well, so this immediately piqued my interest. My favorite part of this chapter was when Draco ...
Jul 29, 2020 -
Re: Kidnapped Confusion
Hello ckk2118! I’d love to give you a review on this sweet story you wrote. You did a wonderful job on describing the couple’s injuries and establishing a bond between ...
Jul 28, 2020 -
Re: The President Committed a Bank Heist
Hey Sheyren, Violet Fantasy here to rate your very thought provoking and most likely accurate story. I would not be surprised if a president in the future robs a bank. ...
Jul 28, 2020 -
Re: fear of heights
Hello there! I’d like to review your wonderful piece of writing. I enjoyed this script quite a lot. It was very relatable and I feel like it kind of describes ...
Jul 28, 2020
