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Vicky17

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Those chains

    Wow thank you very much. I'm really glad you liked it. And you are right, it does apply to depression as well I just didn't have enough space to add ...

    Sep 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Those chains

    Hi(love the digimon avatar btw), thank you. I know my structure needs work and I'm working on it. I just find it hard to have all those thoughts neatly organised ...

    Sep 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Those chains

    Hey, yeah I agree I'm stuck with the punctuation and the format. I'm still working on it but thanks for the review, glad you liked it :D

    Sep 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: It is well.

    Hi, First of all, I really like your poem, the imagery and the symbolism.The flow, in your poem, is very good and the meaning is clear. I do think though ...

    Sep 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Requiem for the unrighteous ones

    hey sorry for the late reply, I haven't been on here for ages. Thanks for the tips, i'm kind of a beginner so it's always good to get feedback. As ...

    Jul 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Group Work

    haha I must say I love it. Very simple and it doesn't even need any explanation. I love the sarcastic tone. I think everyone can relate to this. Keep it ...

    Jun 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Requiem for the unrighteous ones

    Yeah sorry about that I need to fix the lines, it got messed up when I submitted it for some reason. Thank you very much for your review, glad you ...

    Jun 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Requiem for the unrighteous ones

    Hey thanks for the review. Sorry about the lines, I did not format the right side that way, it just changed when I submitted it. As for the capital letters, ...

    Jun 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: An Ocean of Emotions

    I really like your poem and especially the repetition of what am I at the end. I don't know why but it makes it a bit more childish but in ...

    Dec 12, 2011


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