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Zawisza Czerny-- Please read the guidelines/rules for posting before posting any more of your work. Thank you, WM

I can. I went ahead and moved it to 'Lyrics' and I'll let them decide what they want to do with it. It's a hard move =] *moved*

I think I'm going to post this in the debate group as well, and get a debate going--and hopefully get some crits here...since it is an essay lol.

i know!! My best friend and I went and bought it last month, we went to the book store specifically for that, went back to the section for it, saw ...

Psst. I was thinking that. But, my global warming rants take over any form of critiques lol.

I had a really hard time keeping up with it due to lack of rhythm as well. Other than that...it's 'cute' (as previously stated), but not 'great'.

I also enjoyed Speak, but I think there may already be a review post for it? I just remember seeing it a long time ago.

Ha. Well...the first time I wrote this it was realllllly late at night. It was actually for an assignment, and the next day I went through and corrected my million ...

HAHA! Highly entertaining. I love your random little stories, they crack me up. :D

Yes, I agree...I would stick to posting new work of yours--or at least within the last year. Something you write know will definitely be superior to something you wrote when ...

If you have been jumping around and checking out other, past critiques done by both snoink and I, you'd see how 'lavishly' we deal out praise...you really have a good ...

Haha this is quite an amazing little stupid comedy. Maybe.... YWS War I?

Wow, morbid! It was okay, the imagery [as always] was perfect. It's not my favorite of your poems, but had I never read anything else from you I would love ...

I actually have kind of an awkward question for you guys about this....but there is this short story competition [the reward=money=important for college students] and I was wondering if you ...

Haha yea, I tried really hard to describe it where you all would understand it but at the same time be descrete...I suppose then didn't work out to well. It ...