Via

I have to agree with Brad. It's thrown together. You could do so many things with this, though...if you put your mind to it. The end is dramatic, and predictable. ...

he's right, actually. very good. it's hard to find something wrong with it! haha. great job.

I absolutely looove the personification of lonely. It's awesome. And it's a topic that many and most can relate to. It's great. Great job!

You live like a thousand mirrors make no difference – That is definitely my favorite line in the entire poem. I think it makes the most sense of them all. ...

thank you for the feedback! I actually agree with that line...I have changed it like ten times since i wrote it...i can't figure out how to make it sound right. ...

awesome! it's dicey, but it's a good dicey! ...i'm not really sure how to put that haha. Although I do have to agree...some punctuation may be helpful! Good job!

the imagery in this is ridiculously awesome! bravo, I say!

it is very good. i like it, it's very different--it has a different flow & subject it seems then most other poems posted do. :wink: