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Hey Kylan, I actually really like this. I love the description and the parallels between opposites, it's great. The parallels actually are so vivid, however, that they can be confusing ...

Hello and Welcome to YWS! Please take a moment to look over the Rules & Guidelines . Now to the poem: Punctuation is your friend, and other than the first ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! Please take a few moments to look over the Rules and Guidelines . This isn't very bad in the least, though it seems to be missing ...

I'm in agreement....one word lines are not friends. If you use one word lines it allows for no rhythm. I find myself having no idea what you are talking about ...

Hmm. Yes, smoking is say it simply and from facebook and random t-shirts: there are cooler ways to die. But, I think this may have been a little short and ...

I liked it as well. The food in the beginning was funny and well put--like the woman downtown in my city that sings songs about how "just 'cause a radish ...

Yea, I'm with Kitty, I'm pretty sure you really just wanted to post a journal entry...not to have it critiqued. Try your blog on your profile. On the home page ...

Hello Darren! Well, reading over the poem it was okay. And other than the few mistakes pointed out above, I will not note any of my own. The whole thing ...

It's...cute? I would like to see more. I have a serious problem with "little ditty" poems, I just don't know what to do with them. I can rate them against ...

I like both the second and the third more than the first. I don't really know why, but the first turns me off to this completely. I think with the ...

This wasn't bad in the least. What was this written for? It seems kind of like the answer to a school prompt. As a teacher, I would give it an ...

Actually I thought this was pretty good. One error that irked me: And you know if you ever start to wonder where those years have gone, all you have to ...

Hmm, I have to say I wasn't overly joyed by it either. First, I really don't know what happened at the end? That confused me much. But the dialogue is ...

Hi Kalliope! Hmm, this as a song. I'm having a bit of a problem with it, though I'm not really sure why. I have a hard time with lyric poetry ...

[quote="Fye"]It’s 3 a.m. and a spell is cast The book flips open to a sacred past The verses lift themselves in perfect grace Revealing the meanings behind each face A ...