Veritas

Isn't it strange how the compliments of a complete stranger can mean more than a compliment from a friend? However weird it is, it's true. Strangers like the people here ...

Morbidly beautiful, beautifully morbid...I really can't decide but i know it was great! Had tears in my eyes by the end. The whole broken-hearted thing is so cliche and I ...

Wow, that got better and better as I went along. So let me get this straight: humans hate elves, humans are killing elves, humans are going to march to some ...

Hey there! I think you did a really good job with this. The description was topnotch. I wrote a poem about the moon (random one night could see it from ...

The poem is a simple as the content suggests and I applaud you for that! I once read a poem called Simple that was at least three pages long...yeah, that ...

It's very cute and very simpleminded, just like a little girl holding a frog. It's nothing short of perfect for me. I love how you dropped capitalization as it added ...

Didn't really make much sense to me. I agree with the other two people above about how it went downhill. I really was interested for about the first three lines ...

This actually really great. It's imagery and simple descriptions are very fitting. However, I think you should refine it and cut off the rough edges. cut out all the things ...

It was interesting a kept me entertained to be sure. I'm not really qualified to critique it, though. I have a habit of writing fantasy but it also turns out ...

Hey that was really good! I agree with the person who said it was like linkin park. Awesome band. Very cool lyrics! I'd buy the song :) The only thing ...

This is very clever and very cute. I think we can all relate to this: Our little muses are like birds and the only way for them to be clear ...

Wow, this was very very good! Ehh...it's late at night, my mind is fried. Can't really say more than it's super good! The description was cool and kept me going ...

"Young Cjscoot has turned the world of poetry upside down with a little piece of guenius she has called Sufocating. Become entranced as her words blend and flow as smoothly ...

I think I'll have a little fun writing this review. Let's try an offical review for the back of a book. *clears throat* "Young poet Artemis has brought an age-old ...

I absolutely love the fact that a lie is described as a beautiful ribbon. It's lacy and deceiving. Nothing but an adorned lie. I think it's brilliant. Your words are ...