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Re: Vows For Marrying the Earth
How is it going my people? Ok then, for starters, the language is well written, however I don't really understand the point of the poem. I don't understand what it ...
May 8, 2014 -
Re: Meanings of Colors
How is it going my people? Ok, so I'll be honest: I don't love this poem. It's generic, it's obvious, and I know you could have done better. You could ...
May 8, 2014 -
Re: Just Shy, That's All. Wrong.
How is it going, my people? Alrighty, to start off, stanzas may help for other readers. This is more of a personal thing, you don't have to do that if ...
May 8, 2014 -
Re: Is it normal?
How is it going my people? Alrighty, so I love the wording. It's simple, yet very effective. It was very easy to understand and I felt how deep this pool ...
May 8, 2014