VeraWinters

Very well put together. Not many people can pull off doing work this short. You have a very strong sense of language One of the advantages of having a short ...

Love this. I can definitely see why you do. You inject so much emotion into your writing, It is a really important skill to have. The writing is very graphic, ...

This is really good. You capture that uncertain feeling you often get in a relationship perfectly. There are lots of mixed emotions, love ,loss etc A lot of people that ...

Trying to make fan fiction your own is hard , but you pull it off. Not much is explained in this chapter, try and put some more in your next ...

Poetry is hard enougth, but making everything ryme and also sound great is very hard to do. But you can improve on some things. Add some more dementions to it ...

Sounds like a horrible experiance, glad you got out of it. This could have easily been described very cliched like, but this feels fresh and unique. there are a couple ...

This is great, I love stories like this, that show a not so noble act through the eyes of the person commiting it. There is a underlyning innocence in the ...

This is definitely a very different kind of work, I think a lot of people, especially on this site can relate to this. making the writers block and the muse ...

The title origianaly turned me off this, becauce it sounded very one note and flat. But when I read it I found that It has a lot of personality, and ...

I have not read many personal articles on Michael Jackson's death- and none written in a young persons point of view. He oviosly ment a lot to you as he ...

I really enjoyed this. the story i believe is about a girl doing something she will later very much regret, but also about her losing her innocence. the story has ...

This is really good, It must be hard to make an image in three lines. I noticed that they are all connected to nature, is this intentional? My favorite is ...