VeraWinters

First Id like to say that there are a lot of pieces out there like this. Sort of "poor little rich girl" pieces that try and make the reader feel ...

Hi there. I would firstly like to say that you could probably related to every teenage girl (Including me) in the world with this feeling that the world is ending ...

Hi this is good. This is a often talked about character. That is not swayed and effected by anything and just does there own thing. Because this type of character ...

I really like this. I am quite picky when it comes to love poetry, I find it often gets tedious but i really like this one. Since this is based ...

Hi Snoink. this is an interesting piece, It's a interesting way to write about a break up. The first stanza was a bit out of touch with the rest of ...

Nice. Is this a true story, If it is it must have been very scary for you. grave yards at night *shudder*. Anyway, onto the This is a extra ordinary ...

Hi there. This is good. You get your message along well. You have a good sense of rhythm and a very nice flow. Flow is really important in lyrics. Some ...

Hi there. I'm not a huge fan to be honest. I do not really get it. A lot of lovely figurative language but the point is not there. I dare ...

Good. I like this. I feel that it more belongs in fan fiction. Nice writing, it i very detailed and observant, good job. I have never been to a funeral ...

Love this. I'm a sucker for these relationship pieces, when you put people in difficult situations and see how they react. This is done in a extraordinary amount of detail ...

ouch, ultra feminest I enjoyed it though. Nice freah rant with a good flow. Niced drama build at the end, i wanted more of it. This is a very teenage ...

wow. This is a very dark and kind of depressing song. although I believe you should write what is good for you this would be not be very commercial. I ...

Good, really good You really have whimsical writing down, and your very good at creating an atmosphere and world a reader can visit. really well done Story wise it is ...

Hm, this is interesting. In a way it's a bit of a cliched love poem, It really sucks when your trying to write love poetry because most aspects are kind ...

Hm, pretty good. I really like the flow. It practically rolls on my tongue. But some of the lines feel a little unnecessary. Like Or the seven skies blazing blue, ...