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Re: The Bisexual's Lament - Violet
Thanks!
Jan 28, 2019 -
Re: The Bisexual's Lament - Violet
Oh my goodness, I didn't see this for some reason. Thanks so much!
Jan 26, 2019 -
Re: The Bisexual's Lament - Red
Thanks! Honestly, I tried a bit of imagery in this piece at one point, but it didn't seem to fit the style. You should check out some of the other ...
Jan 4, 2019 -
Re: The Bisexual's Lament - Red
Thanks!
Jan 2, 2019 -
Re: The Bisexual's Lament - Blue
Thanks!
Dec 31, 2018 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 20 (LMS IV)
YES PLEASE TAG ME
Dec 30, 2018 -
Re: The Bisexual's Lament - Indigo
The more questions the better! I think you're right though, that I got the mood across but sacrificed some more situational details or specific moments in the process. That'll be ...
Dec 30, 2018 -
Re: The Bisexual's Lament - Indigo
Ah yeah, this one could have been way longer, which would have given more room for specific details. It probably deserves to be longer really, but the Shakespearean sonnet is ...
Dec 30, 2018 -
Re: Distraction
Yeah English is not a fun second language, but the fact that you're writing poetry with it is really impressive!
Dec 29, 2018 -
Re: Conics Unfortunately: 4
Just wait apparently character interactions aren't even the best part. I've heard it's all in the world building.
Sep 22, 2018 -
Re: Conics Unfortunately: 3
I totally forgot that this shows up so early wow. I thought it was like chapter 7 or something. The interludes are pretty fun, honestly. I think they complete the ...
Sep 17, 2018 -
Re: Conics Unfortunately: 2
Watch as the quality deteriorates over the 74 freaking chapters I wrote for this. But I'm glad you like the beginning! That's like the most important part.
Sep 11, 2018 -
Re: Conics Unfortunately: 1
Haha listen. The bathroom humor, the OG occupation... later... stuff. It all ties together quite nicely.
Sep 7, 2018 -
Re: Conics Unfortunately: 74 (end)
There is wifi in the counselor lodge so here I am to respond to your lovely lovely reviews! Thanks so much for seeing this through to the end with me!!! ...
Jun 23, 2018 -
Re: Conics Unfortunately: 2
Yeah... the physics of rotation is probably something I should have avoided outside of just "it creates artificial gravity." Thanks for picking this up! I'll be on kind of a ...
Jun 15, 2018
