Ventomology

Thank you Lim!!! I guess you'll see what all your predictions come out to soon?

Hey, thanks for getting the whole thing out the GR! It's been there for a while... You're definitely right that the beginning is a bit slow. I've been trying to ...

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Thanks! I'm sure I'd enjoy a lot of those books, but I'm also not really dealing with an alternate world in this. We'll get there. It's written, just going through ...

Hey! Thanks so much for taking the time to review this! I saw a whole long line of reviews in my notifs, so I may not reply to all of ...

All good questions to think about. I tend to leave a bit of mystery at first, but there are definitely some that should be answered sooner rather than later, so ...

Hey thanks for taking the time to read this! I'll be honest, I kind of just like writing in present tense, but in this story specifically I wanted to use ...

Hey! Thanks so much for reviewing this! Fair warning ng: I stopped posting chapters a few weeks ago, because there were a few weeks during LMS where I was floundering, ...

SONG SONG SONG Also I'm falling behind yikes. Yay for midterm week. I'm not sure what to say honestly! Like Jabber said already, the imperfections in the poem can sort ...

Yeah I had originally planned on sticking a scene with Petro between the two scenes in this section, which might have helped with the consistency of tone and the flow ...

Thanks! I know the tense and third person can be weird to some people, but it felt right for this story so I went with it. I'll fix those little ...

Ooh yeah, should probably be more consistent about when things are painful. Thanks so much for the tip!

I don't know what's up with my notifications, but I'm so sorry I didn't see your other reviews until today! It's good to know that I'm finally settling into something ...

Hmm... I guess for vibes I usually start with personification and simile? Like, if there's no immediately playful object on Buck's treehouse (though in that case, I think the very ...

Thankfully things will pick up in the next two chapters. Probably it would have been a good idea to just combine 1.02 and 1.03. I think Ming's perspective could have ...