Ventomology

Hey thanks for taking the time to read this! I'll be honest, I kind of just like writing in present tense, but in this story specifically I wanted to use ...

Hey! Thanks so much for reviewing this! Fair warning ng: I stopped posting chapters a few weeks ago, because there were a few weeks during LMS where I was floundering, ...

SONG SONG SONG Also I'm falling behind yikes. Yay for midterm week. I'm not sure what to say honestly! Like Jabber said already, the imperfections in the poem can sort ...

Yeah I had originally planned on sticking a scene with Petro between the two scenes in this section, which might have helped with the consistency of tone and the flow ...

Thanks! I know the tense and third person can be weird to some people, but it felt right for this story so I went with it. I'll fix those little ...

Ooh yeah, should probably be more consistent about when things are painful. Thanks so much for the tip!

I don't know what's up with my notifications, but I'm so sorry I didn't see your other reviews until today! It's good to know that I'm finally settling into something ...

Hmm... I guess for vibes I usually start with personification and simile? Like, if there's no immediately playful object on Buck's treehouse (though in that case, I think the very ...

Thankfully things will pick up in the next two chapters. Probably it would have been a good idea to just combine 1.02 and 1.03. I think Ming's perspective could have ...

Yeah, I'm a but worried that I'll fall into the same trap as last LMS, where the travel time to get from point a to point b really bogs things ...

Yeah I think I have a little less idea of how to start this story than I did with Conics, and it definitely shows in the things that I chose ...

Hmmm yeah the face stuff will probably go away just because this is basically the scene with the most people in it ever, but I'll work on the pacing and ...

There is actually like a whole season about digital torture I'm so sorry.

Hmmm... I think, if we had heard more about the Comtesse from the beginning--rumors, histories, more time in Whisper's headspace, etc.--then it might have made her seem more like the ...

Hmm I'm not sure how likely it would be for the same mutation to pop up totally independently, and equally unsure about how that would even fit into this narrative. ...