Ventomology

Ah, yeah, that is a little awkward. Thanks for coming back to read this bit!

Oh, we'll get to the tie-in. You might groan at me, but it will happen. Thanks for reviewing, as always! It's fun to get your reviews because you always catch ...

Hmm... I really didn't expound enough on why they took the other kid along. I'll have to remedy that. Thanks as always! I promise reviews are coming. I just have ...

Thanks!

...Oh, good! I'm glad the mystery around the bounty target is still strong enough. I've been foreshadowing some stuff since the beginning and was worried about being too transparent. Thanks ...

The great thing about aliens is that they might not follow the same gender structures that we do. I don't want to use 'it' as the gender neutral pronoun, since ...

Yes, tech week like drama. I'm in the pit orchestra for the school production of South Pacific ! It was very exciting. And do not worry about the anticlimactic-ness. I ...

Yeah... even I'm not sure where anything in this chapter came from. I need to keep my wits about me when life gets rough. Thanks as always!

I was definitely floundering for this chapter and the last, but I think I've got a solid direction again. Plus life has been getting in the way of the weekly ...

Ohh, okay. I get what you mean. Thanks for clearing that up!

...Well, I try to make sure filler-ish details become plot relevant, but sometimes with LMS I get sidetracked. We'll see if what I have in mind for the shielding gets ...

Me and my bogged-down action. I keep trying to fix that, but I don't seem to be doing a very good job. Thanks a bunch!

Ahh... yeah... I may be getting lazy with the show/tell thing. I need to redouble my efforts. Thanks so much!

Err... I'm not a hundred percent sure what you're telling me here? Did I bog down the action too much? Because that's definitely a thing I have to work on. ...

Yeah... my action scenes in general need some work. And I hadn't thought of the reciprocal emotions thing. That's something for me to keep in mind as well. Thanks for ...