Ventomology

Whew, clearing the GR? That's quite the task! I applaud your devotion. I'm glad you like the tone of this piece. I was hoping to make the whole thing funnier, ...

Yeah, I've been having some pacing issues with this series. Space travel is time-consuming in this universe, and so much happens during that time, but space is also really empty, ...

Oh my gosh, thank you! I took out all the contractions in Ellipse's dialogue on purpose, yes. She's a total polyglot, and I know my mom uses contractions a bit ...

I would probably leave a campfire too, but at least we probably both use please and thank you. Also thanks for letting me know where you're at with some of ...

Hmm... I should undersell less. Maybe the bad vibes are a byproduct of my late-night editing habits. Thanks for the tips on the science! I'll take that out and see ...

Ah, yeah, that is a little awkward. Thanks for coming back to read this bit!

Oh, we'll get to the tie-in. You might groan at me, but it will happen. Thanks for reviewing, as always! It's fun to get your reviews because you always catch ...

Hmm... I really didn't expound enough on why they took the other kid along. I'll have to remedy that. Thanks as always! I promise reviews are coming. I just have ...

Thanks!

...Oh, good! I'm glad the mystery around the bounty target is still strong enough. I've been foreshadowing some stuff since the beginning and was worried about being too transparent. Thanks ...

The great thing about aliens is that they might not follow the same gender structures that we do. I don't want to use 'it' as the gender neutral pronoun, since ...

Yes, tech week like drama. I'm in the pit orchestra for the school production of South Pacific ! It was very exciting. And do not worry about the anticlimactic-ness. I ...

Yeah... even I'm not sure where anything in this chapter came from. I need to keep my wits about me when life gets rough. Thanks as always!

I was definitely floundering for this chapter and the last, but I think I've got a solid direction again. Plus life has been getting in the way of the weekly ...

Ohh, okay. I get what you mean. Thanks for clearing that up!