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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Conics Unfortunately: 10

    Haha did you know that Mao is also Mandarin for "cat?". We may be thinking of two entirely different nouns there. However, there will be plenty more Earth politics in ...

    Mon Jul 17, 2017 6:30 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Conics Unfortunately: 9

    You're going to hate me when you find out what happens right before the Focci's Ballad sections. Thanks, as always!

    Mon Jul 17, 2017 4:53 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Conics Unfortunately: 10

    Thanks! Honestly, I probably should have planned out the relationships in this story a little better, but there's always draft two, right?

    Mon Jul 17, 2017 4:51 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: Conics Unfortunately: 8

    God I love xenobiology. If we had actually found alien life to study, that's what I'd plan to work on as a career. Thanks again! It's always fun to hear ...

    Sat Jul 15, 2017 8:04 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Conics Unfortunately: 7

    I've been trying to work in a bit of dialogue about how Mouthbot's software actually works, but it could be a while before that actually shows up. But for real, ...

    Fri Jul 14, 2017 3:43 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: Conics Unfortunately: 6

    My strict avoidance of contractions in this piece kills me, and it apparently kills everyone else too. I think I get better about the confusing sentences as time goes on, ...

    Thu Jul 13, 2017 1:07 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: Conics Unfortunately: 5

    Google Russian cursive. It's hilarious. Also, to titter is to laugh or giggle, but the connotation for me usually implies kind of an overly girlish and obnoxious vibe. Yeah, I ...

    Wed Jul 12, 2017 2:21 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: Conics Unfortunately: 3

    This chapter is cute, isn't it? And let me know if you get too far and never see mention of Tejal's birth parents again, because I thought I had mentioned ...

    Sun Jul 09, 2017 8:57 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: Conics Unfortunately: 8

    I definitely have a bunch of continuity errors in many of these chapters. Hopefully I've gotten better about that too. Thanks!

    Sun Jul 09, 2017 5:29 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: Conics Unfortunately: 2

    I'm pretty sure that craft-wise, things just go down from here. But you will like the antagonist, I think. I know I enjoy writing him, so hopefully you'll enjoy reading ...

    Sat Jul 08, 2017 9:34 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Conics Unfortunately: 7

    Oh, I'm so glad you think I'm funny. I sometimes feel like my humor is too dry for most people. And yeah, I need to work on the continuity of ...

    Sat Jul 08, 2017 12:53 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: Conics Unfortunately: 1

    Now that you mention it, I don't think I ever gave Ellipse a good physical description. I'm very awful about describing my sort-of-narrating characters. Unless they meet each other. Then ...

    Sat Jul 08, 2017 12:50 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Conics Unfortunately: 20

    Ah, you. You need to actually post chapters from yours so I can review them. Tag me or something. Anyways, I'm glad you could actually understand any of this. I ...

    Tue Jul 04, 2017 4:17 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Conics Unfortunately: 20

    I'm just going to leave this little plot on hold for a while, because I'm an evil writer and want to frustrate my readers. Hopefully I don't mess everything up ...

    Tue Jul 04, 2017 4:15 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Conics Unfortunately: 19

    I probably should not write my LMS chapters on Sunday night. You're definitely right about the awkward wording, and I should have caught that. I have plans regarding Andra and ...

    Mon Jun 26, 2017 10:03 pm


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