Ventomology

Willful ignorance is one of my favorite character weaknesses, because it provides such great opportunities for dramatic irony. I actually think you'll really enjoy how Ellipse's involvement with the f

The valley girl accent has corrupted us all.

Hey, it's totally okay! There are ultra-famous writers out there who do worse, and this is several months old.

If there's one thing I need to work on in general, it's probably clear motives. I was planning on getting to that in the dialogue of the next chapter, but ...

Ah... I always forget that the Valley Girl accent is a thing. I talk like them, just less so, and so I forget that there's some connotation involved with that ...

I knew I could count on you to review my dastardly political drama moments. Colonialism is so fun. Anyways, I admit to being vague about a lot of things, but ...

Ah, I hate it when I mess up pronouns. Societal binary is such a pain. Anyways, sorry for not replying to some of your other reviews. I did read them! ...

I think of it as a KFC too, honestly.

Oh my goodness how did I not see this? Anyway, belated as it is, thanks so much for leaving a review!

Oh, you will love chapter 21. I think it's the new funniest chapter so far.

The next chapter is a total letdown let me tell you.

Haha did you know that Mao is also Mandarin for "cat?". We may be thinking of two entirely different nouns there. However, there will be plenty more Earth politics in ...

You're going to hate me when you find out what happens right before the Focci's Ballad sections. Thanks, as always!

Thanks! Honestly, I probably should have planned out the relationships in this story a little better, but there's always draft two, right?

God I love xenobiology. If we had actually found alien life to study, that's what I'd plan to work on as a career. Thanks again! It's always fun to hear ...