Ventomology

Hey! Happy Review Day, and sorry I didn't get to these sooner. Anyways, this story format reminds me greatly of Where the Mountain Meets the Moon . I can't wait ...

Yo! This is your first Review Day, right? I hope you have a grand time! Anyways, like Noelle, I'm going to work out the nitpicks as I go through, and ...

Hello there, and happy review day! First off, I really like the idea of the story: really. It's a fantastic idea, and would be even more incredible if you were ...

Yo! I know I didn't get your other chapters, but I felt kind of like I would just be repeating things so... yeah. Anyways, nitpicks first: During the rest hours, ...

Yo! Just as an innocent question, does Shep ever have to shear the sheep? Is that even the right term? Okay, onto the real stuff. I’m going to lie down ...

Yo! Very nice job this week. My biggest complaint would have to be the dragolinx's lack of personality. I mean, yeah, she's a minor character, and yeah, she crumbles at ...

Oh my gosh this chapter is LONG. Also, sorry for taking so long. I was working on some contest pieces, and the radio thing, and... ugh. Anyways, some nitpicks first: ...

Hey! Like Deanie, I really really hope this doesn't end up being the last chapter. And I get the feeling it won't be, anyway! :) Anyway, first, nitpicks: There the ...

Hey! I haven't seen you around for a while! Anyways, I didn't see any grammar errors... and my only nitpick is in the last line. I think the 'sure' is ...

Ooh, what a twist! The suspense is killing me! Now, I don't know if this rule applies everywhere, but it's common practice to put commas before a conjunction if the ...

Yo, Fort! Funny that I'm reviewing you twice in one day, right? Anyways, nitpicks first: As they wove their way through the crowded streets busy with the morning rush[/quotes] Just... ...

This is one WAY long piece of iambic pentameter, but you haven't beat the bard yet! Anways, first, some nitpicks that Mags didn't catch. clasped she coins, Uh... this is ...

Yo! Buggie here for a review. Anyways, lovely first chapter. I love it when writers dump their readers into the middle of the situation, and the fact that you didn't ...

Yo! I'm back, as promised! Also, just as a question, what is your first language? You don't have to answer, but since there were several instances where you didn't capitalize ...

That's a long list of reviewers down there... Let's just hope I don't repeat what they said. Now, first thing, and I noticed this in the second chapter too, was ...