Ventomology

Hey! I figured I'd take a look-see at part one, so here we go: Maybe it just took some time to settle more into the sparse, child-like writing, or maybe ...

Hii! Just stopping by for a quick Revmo review. Not gonna lie, I was kind of hoping for some noodling, but this was cute! Like farq4d already said, you do ...

Hi there! Just stopping by for a quick revmo review. Let's get into it: I poked around in your portfolio for chapter one, so I'm not coming into this blind. ...

Oooooh prophecy! Great poem, by the way. While the rhythm and meter aren't perfect, you did an overall good job sticking as closely as you could to them, and the ...

Heyyy! What a nice little meet-cute. You mention that you wrote this for a class, so I'd be curious to see what the prompt is, but since I don't have ...

Heyy! Back for yet more dragons. So, I've been trying to put my finger on the thing that would really elevate your action from good to great. Like I've said, ...

Hi! Unfortunately I am not an English teacher like Ayumi here, but hopefully I can offer some insight for you. From what I can tell, this is in a pretty ...

Hey! Saw you'd followed up to the Salt and Straw story and thought I'd swing by again. I'm not sure if it was your intent, but one of the first ...

Heyaaa back again. So I've got two things for you this chapter. First, thanks for the reminder that dragons have good noses haha. I think if that is a significant ...

Ten bucks says something will force him to go with the other dragonets. Poor Shadow. Alrighty. Let's talk about dialogue tags! In case you don't know, dialogue tags are the ...

Heyyy! Back again. Obviously Scorch is a horrible dragon, but I think you did a great job with playing that out through his thoughts and dialogue. Now the next step ...

Heya! Just swinging by for a quick revmo review. I went back and read all the previous parts, so hopefully I can offer some worthwhile critique. Out of curiosity... were ...

Heyyy! Thank you for tagging me

I want to put like the "Dermatologists hate her" meme and then a picture of Mireya. Imagine living for... however long she's been around. Anyway, now that we're starting to ...

Hey! Stopping by for a quick RevMo review. Thanks for the little note at the bottom. As a reviewer it's nice to have some clarity on what your intent is ...