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Re: How the Marigold Lost It's Sun: Ch 3
Hello there! Now then, before I get on with the actual review, I have one small suggestion. You may want to up the rating on this piece. Considering that movies ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: Adelantè (Chapters 2/3)
Hello there! Since I believe Eros covered most of the main points, I'll just point out some little details that could use a second glance. 1. While the first sentence ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Death: a Musical Comedy (Act 1 scenes 3 & 4)
Okay so I saw this multiple times on the homepage and decided I really ought to check it out. I have not been disappointed; this is hilarious. (And yes, I ...
Jun 21, 2016 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 24): All Big Words
Yo! I made it! By the way, just out of curiosity, are you planning on continuing to write this piece, even though you're not in LMS anymore? I would like ...
Jun 21, 2016 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 23): Disrespect Your Elders
Haha I am such a great companion not really. Now then, let's get on with the review. General Comments: I knew something was off the first time I read this, ...
Apr 17, 2016 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Seven, Part Eight - Not so Great Expectations
I swear I'm going to get through this. By the way, did you forget to submit last week? Anyways, going on: General Comments: Since I just received this comment in ...
Mar 9, 2016 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Seven, Part Seven - Not so Great Expectations
Ender is beating me now... Oops. Anyways, sorry for not putting in catch-up time earlier this week. Hopefully I can finish all of this on/by the February review day. General ...
Feb 20, 2016 -
Re: Study, Test, Dance, Kiss -Part 1 of 4
It's not often I find romances written from a boy's perspective. This will be intriguing. General Comments: 1. You may hear this from someone else today, so my apologies if ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 13
I thought I was all caught up, and then while I was wandering the GR looking for something to review, this little monster ambushed me... Why didn't you warn me ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 22): Not Quite There
Whenever I read nice reviews, I am reminded of how harsh a person I tend to be... Never underestimate yourself because of something I say, alright? Now then, onwards and ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Seven, Part Six - Not so Great Expectations
I made it! Final catch-up review, here I come! General Comments: 1. I can't believe I never noticed it before, but you do an excellent job showing the characters' ages ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 21): Can't Hear While You Drown (In Thoughts)
Hello again! Let's cut straight to the chase, cool? General Comments: 1. Explanations are always best-served with the occasional interjection. Good job. 2. There are a couple of typos/awkward wordings
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Seven, Part Five - Not so Great Expectations
Does Aiden even know a thing about cartography? It's harder than it would seem... Anyways, since I am limited on time tomorrow, I suppose I should quit the idle chat ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 20): Arguments, Again
Yo! Let's get this review day off to a strong start, shall we? General Comments: Sometimes the objects of your sentences aren't clear, but that's not an issue I know ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Seven, Part Four - Not so Great Expectations
Hm, joke's on me for that 'we all three of us' thing then. Nice turn around. Now then, my apologies for being a slow reviewer. Let's move on, shall we? ...
Dec 30, 2015
