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I'm really glad you turned me on to this one too and I can say that It's 9:00 on a Saturday Night was not just a lucky break in terms ...

Well this took my day into a pretty real place... I think that poems like this that aren't exactly sad, but certainly aren't happy really are the best at pulling ...

This is a really interesting topic to me as I've not really thought about this before. Maybe "person" just means human to some, but I think this poem could challenge ...

This is a beautiful poem in every way and I'm glad that someone finally put to paper what I'm sure most of the people on YWS feel. Writing is an ...

I really like the subject you chose as I'm sure this resonates with a lot of the people on YWS ad it did me. I might see some people looking ...

First off, I loved this. This was a really fun poem and I even like cats (two of them at home :D) and I actually thought that the format you ...

I might see where other people could take issue with the poem, as some might see it as lacking in emotional context, but for some reason I don't think that's ...

I really like how this story has progressed so far. I've seen this used before and I'll say what I said before; The use of a misfit or someone that ...

Stories like this always get to me with more truthful depiction of highschool life. From nothing other than a purely objective view, the perspective of this girl works well to ...

I will just say that I agree wholeheartedly with cpedro. Your story seems to be well developed, and apart from the usual minor grammatical and spelling issues, I think it's ...

I honestly couldn't find very much to critique, cheers on that! I normally find anything with wolves and/ or werewolves to be actually painful to read but this was masterfully ...

I am really quite enjoying the story so far, but I think that if a darker air is desired then it would be best to get straight to it. What ...