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Re: Leave out all the rest
Thorough corrections: Red = My corrections or suggestions. Bold = My comments. Underline = What I’ll be commenting on. Red Strikethrough = Omit ¶ = I started new paragraph. I ...
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: For the Love of Fashion Chp 1
Hello! My name is Sam and I’ll be reviewing your novel today =) . Now that we're past that dorky introduction, let us move forward :D If you click on ...
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: Prologue
The first few lines are always key, since they're what either suck the reader in or pushes him away... This definitely succeeded in the first. You did wonderful with imagery ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Twenty-One
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Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Twenty
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Jul 4, 2009 -
Re: You're It (Preface)
Since others have already pointed out the grammar, I'll just go right on to reviewing. Cute is the first word that comes to mind to describe this. I like your ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Nineteen
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Jun 20, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Eighteen
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Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Seventeen
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Jun 10, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Sixteen
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Jun 5, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Love You(3)
Heyy, sorry this was insanely late... Craaazy final exams week and stuff. That's all over now, though, which means you'll see me around more. Yay. (Just 'cause it's in a ...
May 25, 2009 -
Re: Like Broken Glass
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May 15, 2009 -
Re: Gaurdian Angel
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May 13, 2009 -
Re: Love
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May 9, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Love You(2)
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May 9, 2009