Vasticity

Hi FQ. You really did a good job on this poem. You tell your story well and all your grammar, punctuation, and spelling is correct. The wording really captures the ...

Hey Sol! This is an interesting poem and you paint a picture well with it. I like the placement of the bible verse, (thank you for including a link) it ...

Your spelling and punctuation and grammar and all that are fine, but the poem is too short to paint a picture or tell a story. If you make it longer ...

Two words: PUNCTUATION and SPELLING. I'm just going to go through the whole thing here because it's pretty short. The mistakes are in red and my notes are in blue. ...

This is a very interesting poem. The way you the words are written makes me think that someone clearly wrote them with passion. You have grammar and spelling all right, ...

Very well done. You certainly paint a picture I can see, and the way you subtley describe things is the best part of it. I agree with Kwantack on the ...

Well done! Though it's too short, it does manage to envoke emotion in the reader and make him want to see the rest of the story. So just make it ...

Hi. I'm going to start off by saying there's something weird about this poem. It's kind of confusing what you're talking about, and because of that, it comes off as ...

All right. I like the story, I'm just going to cover a few things. In a lot of places, you lack necessary punctuation. Here's one example: Kirks bunk mate, Owen, ...

This story speaks a lot to me. The way you say that you shouldn't care about what people who hate you think about you is and has always been my ...

Let me just start off by saying I haven't reviewed in a few months, so I'm a little rusty. It's short, but it gives a valid impression of what you ...

This is my first review in a while, so forgive me, I'm a little rusty. You really managed to capture the spirit of what is going on in your story ...

Let me just start off by saying I don't listen to music with lyrics, so I'm not going to critique the song overall. I'm going to critique your spelling, punc., ...

Let me just start off by saying I don't like this kind of music, so I'm not going to give a critique on the quality of it, and what it's ...

hey, amu. Lemme start off by saying you almost have the formatting right. But I'll just list off the issues. First off, when you list a character's name, just before ...