Vasticity

I know nothing about poems, but as per our arrangement: I like the imagery, it seems like it accentuates on little things that are overlooked, like motion or texture, which ...

I like it. I found no errors with this (possible) exception: 'Which one? Sleeping Beauty? She sighs, then follow through.' I think 'follow' is supposed to be 'follows,' but I'm ...

Wow, that was quite interesting, I'm definitely going to be excited to see more. You don't have any spelling/grammar/punctuation errors that I can see, but there seems to be quite ...

It was interesting, but it's not a script. Read this: and download Celtx, which is a free script formatting program that's helped me a lot, if you wish it to ...

Hi. First off, the only problems I can find with your formatting is in the character names, you have a colon after the name and no enter space. Dialog shouldn't ...

All right, there's a lot of things that need to be dealt with so I'm just going to go all at once: 1. This is too short. 2. There's no ...

okay, so, this is going to be a long review, but I recommend that you really listen to what I'm saying if you seriously want to get into scripts. First ...

Hi! This needs a bit of work. A: Your punctuation and spelling is way off. Hehehe this is what you call easy money! Aah life is good. There should be ...

Hey again. The mistakes will be pointed out in red, while my critique on that part will be in blue. It is raining Steady and consistent I am alone Safe ...

hey there. While there's no spelling or grammar errors that I can see, this is really too short to articulate a story or give the reader anything new or even ...

While this is exciting and interesting and will obviously develop into a good story, There's a few issues: One: It's too short! Now we're left hanging as you unfolded this ...

Hey Atticus! So let me start off by saying I enjoy what is interpreted in this piece, your wording makes it very memorable and, in fact, sometimes haunting, such as ...

I was going to say that this belonged in a different section, but I see this is like a prologue, or whatever. First off: you have a lot of punctuation ...

Hi Rob! This would be an interesting story if it weren't for your odd structuring. When a character speaks in a story, it should be in quotation marks. Also, you ...

Hi! This is a good poem, in my opinion, but it seems very, well, I don't know how else to put it, emo. You're complaining about how your feelings are ...