Valkyrie17

Hey there Valkyrie here to leave a review! Firstly, I enjoyed this piece. It didn't end how I thought it would when I started reading this piece which is great, ...

Oh, I did like this little tale filled of melancholy. It was beautiful in its simpleness and its ability to speak volumes beyond the words you have written here. "I ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! I am Valkyrie and I am here to leave you a review. :D Ok, so this is a nice little prologue. There is a ...

You already know that I love this piece, so yeah you definitely have a lifelong fan if you keep this up! :D Before I start listing the bits I loved ...

Hey, I am here to leave another review for this edited piece! :) Firstly, well done on successfully editing this into a much improved piece. It is really great to ...

Hey, here to leave a review! This is a great short that is successfully thought-provoking (as I am sure you meant it to be). I myself love to question society ...

Ok chapter 2 here I am! :D Its considerably shorter than the first chapter but thats not too much of a problem; I was just excited to read more. :) ...

Hello! Here to leave another review. :) You have got another great story here. You have really drawn us in as readers and your ability to give us so much ...

Hey there Aquila! I am here to leave you a review. :D I like what you have started here. You have set up a futuristic world with a new race ...

Hey Anna! I am here to review your story! :) This was a lovely little introduction and sets up the story for all sorts of action between Anna and Jarrett. ...

Hey Alora! I am here to review your story. :) This is a great piece as the description has a nice balance between being enough for us to understand and ...

Wow. This chapter has blown me away with its amazing quality and quantity. This is outstanding. You definitely have the qualities of being a great writer! :D There is hardly ...

There are no paragraphs! :( Okay, this piece has me scared and I am not the only the MC is actually after! I am trying to resist the urge to ...

When are you going to post something I don't like? ;) This is beautifully written and incredibly interesting! I personally haven't read much fiction to do with passing on from ...

Wow, this is ridiculously good! I can't seem to find anything wrong with this amazing piece, sorry if this review isn't that helpful. :D I am only able to spot ...