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Re: S*** happens
haha... im very happy that you liked it and thanks for the review. -Usero
Dec 3, 2013 -
Re: S*** happens
Thanks for the review. And I really couldn't decide whether to choose "some place" or "of a place". I though people who review might help me with it. -Usero!
Dec 2, 2013 -
Re: Cigarette
Thanks a ton for your review. I'm glad that you liked it! -Usero!
Dec 2, 2013 -
Re: Cigarette
yeah man , i cant agree any further.I felt the same way when i wrote the word stink, but i couldnt think of anything better. Sink seems to be nice ...
Dec 1, 2013 -
Re: Cigarette
yeah man , i cant agree any further.I felt the same way when i wrote the word stink, but i couldnt think of anything better. Sink seems to be nice ...
Dec 1, 2013 -
Re: Cigarette
hey, thanks for the quick response.I loved your review and shall make a note of all what you mentioned. -Usero
Dec 1, 2013 -
Re: Cigarette
profane meaning??...I would definitely like to hear it. Thanks for going through my work and commenting on it. I have always been intrigued by the act of smoking, and thought ...
Nov 30, 2013 -
Re: Life- it's not rocket science!!
Im glad that you like it. Will work on my spacing next time!! -Usero!
Nov 19, 2013 -
Re: Morning Skies
Hey fire girl! Il limit myself to a comment. The second stanza was art. Your very thought of seeing birds flying as brush strokes and the background as a fresh ...
Nov 17, 2013 -
Re: Godlike Murderer!
Haha....thank you very much. Know what, initially when i wrote mine, i felt "the cause" and "all" had a purpose and gave an impact to this poem. But its only ...
Nov 17, 2013 -
Re: Godlike Murderer!
Haha....thank you very much. Know what, initially when i wrote mine, i felt "the cause" and "all" had a purpose and gave an impact to this poem. But its only ...
Nov 17, 2013 -
Re: Godlike Murderer!
Thank you Rainn, a very constructive review! I had doubts with that sat and sit thing right when i wrote this one. Am i not allowed to change tenses in ...
Nov 17, 2013 -
Re: Life- it's not rocket science!!
Cant thank you enough! Any form of feedback is most welcome and i shall make it a point, to cut down on unwanted punctuations. I never knew till now that ...
Nov 17, 2013 -
Re: Money- Ironic reality
Thanks a ton zolan! This was what i was talking about.I shall definitely take all this into consideration, next time when i write. -Usero.
Nov 17, 2013 -
Re: Life- it's not rocket science!!
Thank you. I shall make a note of what you said. It really helped. Usero.
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