UrbanNomad

You are very perceptive. You even managed to clarify some of the mysteries I had with this poem! I suppose fire brings warmth but can also represent a kind of ...

Thanks for spending the time, Heather.

Read comments below for the meaning of the second two lines. It isn't very cryptic to be honest, just a desire to influence our surroundings as a means of motivation. ...

Thank you Kisha. Sometimes I like to keep it short and impactful. This isn't your usual 4 stanza poem so try to look at it as a reflection written in ...

Ok the last past is talking about the desire to change the world around us, whether that be yourself, your family, your town, country or entire planet. The revolutionary mindset ...

Thank you for the feedback, Yes, it is short and often I feel that poetry should be said with brevity and few words. Motivation must be an explicit concept.

This poem is not meant to convey 'woe is me'. Far from it actually. I do not simply accept that problems exist and choose to live in a state of ...

You can call me pretentious if you like, that doesn't bother me. Titles don't matter. In the place that I live, people numb themselves from reality with alcohol, indecision and ...

A very well written essay. However, as a point of discussion I would like to say that the scientific method should involve no religious interference. For example, I am a ...

This is just excellent. I don't find many poems written with this level of craft. Please give me some insight into your inspiration for it. "But there are too many ...

Haha, no I do appreciate the fact you are giving me advice for free :) A beautiful letter from the girl (in the poem) just arrived in my mailbox from ...

Thankyou for consolidating my view. If you think there is such thing as a 'proper poem' and that there is a way 'it should be written' than I sympathize with ...

Thanks for reviewing. But seriously-I have a problem with the feedback I am getting. Is everyone on this website stuck into a box of how poetry should sit on the ...

I really like this, the message that is. The poem itself is cliche, predictable etc but of course you did that on purpose I believe. The last stanza reminds me ...