Urba

I'm not even gonna tell you hi And I must say this is the worst story I've ever read... First of all...one's feelings can surely be different from others but ...

Good day:) Feeling happy to meet another 13 (I'm also 13)*_* This poem of yours is really heart-touching I must say. Your lines have something that can make a reader ...

Hi...Hello...Hey...and Happy Day... Ooooo!! Your short little poem is sooooooooo cute. I can imagine the whole thing. A yellow pixie or green like Tinkerbell, so bright, so glittering, so magical ...

Hey!Hello!Hi!Hey there!Merry Christmas and everything... Okay First of all it's about your 3rd and 4th line: 'Take me to doctor after doctor' 'But I'm not exactly dead' I didn't get ...

Hey there!! In your 3rd line: 'destined' is not the perfect word, I think. How about 'Born'? In your 2nd line of the 3rd part: "Our love will grow to ...