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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Childhood Sweetheart - Chapter 4

    Another well-done chapter. I like the way that you ended it, with the Sean-Jacob thing and Anne, I do agree with alliyah when she said that you might want to ...

    Jun 4, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Childhood Sweetheart - Chapter 3

    OOh! ANother great chapter. Seriously, this book keeps getting more exciting and mysterious in so many ways. I love the very last paragraph when Tony's whispering in her ear and ...

    Jun 2, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Gray and Dangerous

    This made me think of a transformation poem I had to write for English Advanced class. I like the rhythm of it and the way that the last two words ...

    Jun 2, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: lungs breathe, hearts beat and my mind loves

    I truly honestly love this poem. It describes exactly how I feel towards boys. And much like the main character in this, I do not let my heart love, I ...

    Jun 2, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: What would you do?

    I really like this. I almost actually answered the question at the end. This is my review. Far too many people actually realize that something like this, this mere poem ...

    Jun 2, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Childhood Sweetheart - Chapter 2

    I'm so excited! And I just can't hide it! The characters were played out well, I'd really like to know more about this Sean guy and the secret that thing ...

    May 31, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Childhood Sweetheart - Chapter 1

    Ooh! I'm so excited for the next chapter. I love your stories, you are such a good writer! I didn't see anything majorily wrong with the story but some parts ...

    May 29, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: 'Til Death Do Us Part - Chapter 13: Epilogue

    Okay, so, this is a review for the whole book. I went through and reread everything like I always do at the end of a book and these are my ...

    May 29, 2012


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