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Re: Chink in My Armor
Oh man, oh, man. This gave me goosebumps. Well- glory bumps, as my Pastor calls them. I think this is really good, the hook was really interesting. It caught my ...
Nov 8, 2017 -
Re: I Write Instead Of Speak
This is- amazing. Not only is it relatable but it leaves you with a feel as if we’re are you ourselves. I like how it has a pensive sadness to ...
Nov 8, 2017 -
Re: My Crimson Splotches
Right off the bat, the title is rather interesting. ‘My Crimson Splotches’. I like it. I can appraise how in the second stanza it says 'Know not the dreadful sound ...
Nov 8, 2017 -
Re: In Us
I like this, a lot, however, as odd as it sounds, I feel like in some parts you describe it too much. For example, "A little brown girl and a ...
Oct 9, 2017
