TylynRae

Hey there =] This was really good. I had a friend thats absolutely in love with the series go to the midnight premiere. I'm glad that this series has helped ...

Puhreach! (That was my attempt at being ghetto=]) Anyway, I think this is really good. It really gives people the inside of what its like being a woman growing up. ...

I'll have to agree with the previous reviewer. This story was really good, it was short and blunt. Harsh almost. But you never really let us know How he knew ...

Heyy there, here as requested! I think the imagery is great here. The scenes in general that you set up sort of remind me of the newest little red riding ...

Hey there =] This was reaaally good. I found the rhythm right away and the lines were straight to the point without giving Everything away. You played it nicely. I ...

Hello there. 1. You spelled does wrong. Dose= does 2. You need to capitalize the title. 3. There are a lot of small grammatical errors, like leaving an s off ...

Hey there =] I thought the idea of this was really good. But I wish it would executed a little bit more differently. The poem was a bit messy. The ...

Um. This sort of drove me nuts. First: The title. It needs capitalized. Second: Your grammar is off. A lot. Third: You didn't capitalize I hardly ever. Those are the ...

I totally loved this! First: The freud pun was absolutely hilarious. Considering I'm huge into psychology, that won some total brownie points =] Two: I LOVE that this is isn't ...

First! The format is a bit iffy. I used to center my poems too until I figured out that most publishing companies would rather them be a straight line down ...

I'll have to agree with the previous commenter on this one. The rhythm is a bit off here and there, and the flow is really hard to find. But I ...

Hello there =] Here to review as requested! I didn't see anything majorly wrong with it, but there are a few grammatical errors. I really liked that you did this ...

Hey there =] This was a really good piece, definitely short, but very good. I think you captured a lot in this piece and the setting and word choice was ...

Hi there =] First off, I would like to say that I TOTALLY get where you're coming from. I went through the exact same thing as your main character, and ...

Hey there =] From the first things that I've read of yours to now, I can definitely see the changes in how much emotion you're putting into things. Before it ...