TylynRae

Hello there. Well firstly, I liked the poem overall. It was easy to understand and relate to. But one of the bigger nitpicks I have with it, is that it ...

Hey there =] For a first attempt, this was pretty good and I think Kitty caught you on most of the mistakes that I found. The capitalization thing is a ...

Ah, I liked this a lot. It reminds me of a lot of personal things... like. A lot. But anyway, I'm glad that you can't do short poetry, you have ...

Holy crypt man! This was absolutely amazing... The flow was brilliant and I love how you ended it with sort of the way you began. This was moving and made ...

Hey Carbon =] You were the first on my creeping list, so here I am! Creeping! So anyway, I really liked Bog and How The Pen Fell, they had totally ...

I liked this a lot. =] It was short and to the point. Another reason I really liked this piece is because I could relate to it a lot... my ...

Pretty descent poem here. The last stanza, you say O, instead of Oh, probably a little bit of a texting mix up, haha. But this is a very interesting poem, ...

One quick critique so I dont forgot! Murders should be murderers. Ah, now that thats done. I would like to say that I really like this poem. I've studied up ...

This was a nice piece, easy to relate to for a lot of people, including myself. The overall message was good, it was pretty smooth. I think you had a ...

Oh my god oh my god oh my god!!!! GAH! So when I first read this I was asking myself whether I've seen this episode or not and then I ...

Hullo there. I've noticed with a lot of your poetry its very very short, and usually has something to do with regular day life, which can definitely be a good ...

Oh my god. I read one of your poems, and decided to read more of your stuff. And with that, I have become hooked. There is no doubt in my ...

This has to be one of the most brilliant poems I've read in a long time. The emotion you caught in this... was just... awe inspiring? I think you shed ...

So just recently I attended a play based on the Princess Bride, and this sort of reminded me of it a lot. How the princess waited and waited for Westley ...

Solvey! Hey there =]]. This was absolutely lovely! I saw one instance however that made me wrinkle my nose. This entire piece is romantic and beautiful and very sophisticated. Which ...