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This was very good! But can you change the font? It's difficult to read like this. Once you got into the action, it went really nicely, but it was how ...

Na, you need to add the tags in when you post it up here. :) See?

Type it up here, don't put it as a document for us to download, that isn't the way it works. By the by, what's "SN" stand for? What's your fic ...

Nice Friesan!

Well, that's a new subject. ^_^ Maybe you should add speech marks for the cafe boy's words?

I read it ages ago, and to be frank, I was rather freaked out by it. Maybe I should try reading it again, though.

Change the name? Or mention something that Summer did or whatever, in a way that is undubitably doggy. :)

Nice. :) At first when I saw the title, I thought it'd be some cliched teen angsty one, but it was good!

LOTR. HP promotes... well, I won't go there.

Wow. I am awed by the simplicity and subtleness of this poem's point, how well the meaning is hidden among the richness of the imagery and how brilliantly you avoided ...

Interesting! Pretty good beginning, if a touch too info-dumpy, but I guess that can't be helped. Was it intentional that you gave the boy a name that's an insult as ...

Chapter Seven: Stormy Petrel Li died late the next day. He never awoke from his coma, but as the light from the window faded, and the blood on his head ...

Oh, yes, the ending of the third one was simply BEGGING for a 4th. :D

... Now you've made me feel guilty, Gyr. :roll:

That Tornado Alley song's good! Nice cover as well. :)