Twit

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Massaging his neck, he glanced into the reflective surface of the window set behind his desk. When I read that, my mind was going, “Oh… window set. Like television set.” ...

Coo - interesting. :D It was very enjoyable and easy to read, and your style was fine, with just a few tweakings needed. My first day of kindergarten, a kid ...

Madame Lokskrip, a formidable woman with flaming red hair and rather too-large a nose, paced back and forth in front of her pupils, eyes flashing like those of a general ...

The buildings were made of giant blocks of terra-cotta colored stone, looming all around her. Shouldn't terra-cotta be all one word? The courtyard was bare of either grass or trees, ...

Vogon: I think this might work better without a rhyme scheme. I know it's just supposed to be "fluff" like and all, but the rhymes didn't really work. I've read ...

First, before you put anything of your own up, make sure that you review at least two other stories, by other people. The Rules and all. As to the story ...

Sorry it's taken so long. Doing this as -- wait, I missed another chapter? Coolummy, sorry. Er, chapter-before-the-most-recent-one... “He is with me,” replied Moncreif before the ensign could say

Isaac stared up. He had been standing on the deck since dusk, counting the hours as the moon paced across the sky until it vanished into a thicket of clouds. ...

Woo, update. ^_^ As always, sound, enjoyable, creepy. Is it going to go through everyone ? “Mabel,” I said dully, though my eyes widened at the sight . That bit ...

Just reading the first sentence and skim reading the rest. Where the heck is your punctuation? Servant: Madam Mary…..she does it again….she does it again….she put mice in the kitchen. ...

*gurgles* Hilarious. The VGPG and Prince Charming are the funniest. These things are really difficult to crit, and your's is just as much, simply because it's so funny and it's ...

I had a crit, and my fingers pressed the wrong button. Net result: lots of screaming and a lost crit. So, to be brief: this seemed grammatically sound, but some ...

The sounds of birth filtered around the rural village of Tumblegreat. The screams of agony pierce the eardrums, countered by the gently soothing voice of the aged mid-wife urging to ...

"He likes to laugh, and not in a good way." Oooh, ooh! It's the Joker! But cut him a little slack, it's near impossible to write an original fantasy book ...