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Take a look at your perfect world! I think this would be better and less overly dramatic if you took out the exclamation mark. What would you do if it ...

This is amazing. I don't know what it is about it, but it's just really great, and most especially the 'Horus' thing. Coolbeanses. :D I didn't see any grammer or ...

:lol: I hate works like this, simply because they give me nothing to critique, and I can't pad out my post long enough to be a review. Nyahh. :razz: In ...

Hi! I read all this chapter, and it was well written and easy to read. Enjoyable. :) However, I did notice some things. The "plush battling" is... well, it's weird, ...

Yay, you put more up! :D Well, as this is in two halves... The second was very very very good. On the one hand I'm not surprised that Moncreif has ...

Midnight Horror Island Midnight Horror? Who calls an island that out of a Scooby-Doo mystery? Ring......ring.... I don’t like writing sounds out like this, even though many other people do. ...

This is really just about da Vinci's professional life. You could mention that he was probably gay, about his students, like Salai and Zoro. Leonardo di ser Piero Da Vinci ...

I thought it was going to be a simple thing, really, I did. I think this might be better as two sentences. Viz. “I thought it was going to be ...

Just a note, don't clutter the thread with pleas for reviews. Bumping is bad. Just wait and reviewers will come. Well, sometimes. *sigh* Lol, anyway... Fidgeting nervously , I stood ...

Hi Kaylyn! In case you didn't know (not to sound patronising), one of the Rules on here is that members must review at least two other pieces of work before ...

This was great! I really enjoyed reading it, and it was really cool how you gave the 'evil stepsisters' proper characters and made Cinderella out to be shallow and grasping. ...

I liked it. It had lots of emotion, and it was well written -- very well written in parts. Your description is just right. But I hate this line: “Why ...

I have absolutely no idea how to crit this synopsis. Ai yi yi... Karenna, overwhelmed by this sudden revelation, to say nothing of the responsibility laid on her shoulders , ...

But for now they scattered back to town, called home for lunch by the tolling of the town square’s bell tower. This is very nitpicky, but perhaps you could mention ...

Sara had her hands inside the bowels of the printer, like a doctor handling the heart of a surgery patient with blood-slippery fingers . Fantastic image, but this is perhaps ...