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O hai. This is cute! :mrgreen: I was tucked into my bright orange covers, in my Tinkerbell pajamas and my waist length light blonde hair back in a ponytail. We ...

O hai. :mrgreen: I read the first Mayflower some time ago, so I had to go over it again to see if I'd forgotten anything. Reading this chapter makes me ...

I felt the icy hand on my neck. Good hooky beginning. ^^ Shivers ran through my whole body, my breathing came in quick ugly gasps. I think it would be ...

O hai. The summons from the Kalagat came in the middle of a morning , sun peeking from behind clouds, but much like an owl seeking out her prey in ...

O hai. ^^ It's very hard to get a clear picture of what's going on as I don't have the previous chapters, but even so, it's worded a little strangely ...

O hai. ^^ This did draw me in from the front page, and I quite enjoyed it, actually. The comparasions were all effective apart from, I think, the "caged man" ...

It was very stiff, as the others all said, but what was really missing was a sense of time and place. Jerusalem, in which ever century this is set in, ...

Iosville. As stories go, this was really, really short and -- I have to say it, though it pains me none -- rather pointless. No point, dull, no rub, crux ...

O hai. :P When it came to the issue of sex, Mum and Dad supplied Vivian and me with the information. They gave us a couple of books to read ...

*stars* This is brilliant. I'm really enjoying this -- I read Chapter One but you'd already had good crits, so… Dirinel's trip to the girl couldn't have come at a ...

O hai. ^^ I really enjoyed this. :) Quite original, with the more modern feel to it and the Terry Pratchett-esque witch. However, that type of witch seems to be ...

O hai. ^^ This was vaguely interesting, and written fairly well, but there were also quite a few things that let it down. The appearance of "hooded figures" in a ...

Hai! Welcome to Yewis! (If you don't call YWS Yewis people are liable to spam your guestbook with Yewis chants). One of The Rules is that you review at least ...

o_O O my, this was uber depressing. I have to ask, is this going anywhere? At the moment it doesn't seem like there's much point to it. It's depressing, depressing, ...

O hai. :P “ Hi. Hows your day been so far then?” I asked him. “Hows” should be “how’s”, and there should be a comma after “far”. “ Al right. ...