TwistedMuffins

Hi there Doll! Well, um, I really do not know how to review this, considering the fact it is only one stanza. But, I still managed to pick a few ...

Hey there! Weakness?

Hi there! I actually really like this poem! Everything, according to me, seems very well written. There isn't a thing I could change expect this: Your sentences are way too ...

Hey there S.S. Rose! Now, there is one major, major thing that is most noticeable that is lacking from your poem. Punctuation. A punctuation mark can actually change an entire ...

Hey there! I will admit that it wasn't midnight, nor was it dark and stormy, when he awoke . I like the blue highlighted part! I actually kind of expected ...

*poke* Hai, Mac! There really isn't anything to change. It is perfect as it is. Though, I was just wondering; And in the Northern Dictatorship of Greenland and Greenisland , ...

Hi there, Sakshi! First off, welcome to YWS. Hope you enjoy it here. Also, WAITING FOR UR COMMENTS..... Don't worry. People will review it. Give it sometime. Now, I'll have ...

Hey there! I'll be reviewing this today! First off, there isn't any uniformity. The first stanza has four lines, and then the second has six lines, and the third has ...

Hey there! I'll be reviewing this today! Everything I'll have to say/correct will be in red. He D ied alone. D shouldn't be capital. Deep in the Forest Of Silence, ...

Hi, first off, welcome to YWS! Hope you enjoy it here! Now, just saying, isn't this a bit too short for anyone to review? I'm sorry to be so harsh, ...

Hi there! My name is TwistedMuffins, and I'll be reviewing your work today :) There are a few things to take care of, like, punctuation. It hurts to know that ...

Hey! I *finally* got to your book! Sorry for the delay though! Frankly speaking, there isn't much to correct. It looks all good. Though there are a few things I'd ...

Hi there! I'm going to make this really quick. So you put this in 'Other', but did you try writing this as a poem? To me, it seems like a ...

Hey Icy! Well, they weren't many mistakes I've found. But here they are anyways: “Happy birthday. ”My face (Yes yes, I'm being a bit too nitpicky here.) There should be ...

Allo! Okay then, uh, a review! A World At Rest (