Twinkle4ever

I love this. The emotions seem so real that I was lost in that one paragraph for the entire time I was reading it. Very realistic, intense, creative, also dramatic. ...

I'm so sorry. I did the paragraphing but no matter how many times I edit and repost it, the paragraphs just don't come... :(

Hi there, It's nice to have you posting stories. Always a joy to read them. Nice job creating the suspence here. Can't wait to read what'll happen next. Wall post ...

There's a lot of suspense in this story. Alright, here's my review. I think the dialogues are chosen perfectly here. What I mean is that the way of talking describes ...

For all those who are confused. This is just to inform you guys that irruption means invasion or attack. (Just so you don't mistake it for eruption) Thanks for reviewing! ...

First of all, 'I fought for you', very touching words. Second, you've written quite well. You gave the introduction about past, present and future. You explained your thoughts and opinions ...

Thanks for all your comments!! :) :)

It was a good poem. Emotions were reflecting with each line. I like the title you've chosen for your poem. It was very well thought and eye-catching. It suits it. ...

I really lost track of everything while I was reading your story. I was so mesmerized with it. You're a fine writer. And I'm looking forward for more chapters :)

I'm not so familier with songs or poetries but now that I've read your song, I really enjoyed it. I'm really looking forward to read more. :)

It may be short but it is better than most of the long stories I've ever read. The sadness, the aches, the pain, the cries; it all touched me deep ...