Twinflower

I was trying to portray that the person singing was not really real, and so the words the narrator heard were just figments of his/her own imagination. Also, i don't ...

Thanks for the comments everybody! I agree about the "stubborn brokeness" being too bulky for that line and changed it to "your stubborn rents would not mend". i hope that ...

Unfortunately, I've already written out the plot line, and the clock doesn't come back for several chapters. there are other characters that come into play soon.....

Thanks for the reviews!