TwinSeed

I'm not gonna bore you with corrections, that was already, nicely, done above. I like this poem, it's inspiring to people who're feeling down. You're rhyming though; there was no ...

I liked this story; not really any point to it, but short and fun to read. I think that you should indicate earlier that Spark is an Aiger, because, until ...

Personally, I like your use of "mine" in the first stanza; like an old poem. Butbecause none of it aside from that is set in the same form, it just ...

It's a nice poem, creative and expressive. In the first stanza, I'd like to know what the "Sleepless forest" is referring to though.. I find your use of adjectives odd. ...

The grammar has already been corrected, not that I was gonna nit-pick at that, haha. I agree with Sassykat though, this does appear to be thought out and it's a ...

I have no particular criticism here, aside from what Balaczter said about the punctuation. And honestly, the part about the box confused me until I read the above critique, so ...

This was... wow. It expresses everything that anyone needs to know to fake insanity xD I loved the stanza: "I lost myself In a river of blood. Over and over. ...

This. Was. Awesome. I only have a couple things to say. "Giggling and laughing, their spirits high Each fairy pairs with another, with no sigh" In the second line here, ...

Allow me to start by saying that I absolutely adore your rhyme scheme! As Elinor said, it doesn't work as well as a free-style would, but it's still nice that ...

I'm not going to go into great detail like Copsonator, I'm not patient enough with myself to review it that thoroughly. Instead, I'll tell you simply how I felt about ...

What the two people above me found confusing, I found intriguing. Such as when you posted "Though not to i try, yet i cry", as brought to everyone's attention above, ...

I find it interesting how you put a single period after "The end", implying that the poem could go no further, instead of the three dots that imply there's more ...

Let me start by saying that I deeply empathize with you and hope that your sister gets back soon, unharmed and safe once again. This song, the simple lyrics sung ...