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Re: A Wish
Like I said, anytime :)
Dec 26, 2012 -
Re: Untitled for now
Hey, thanks a lot. I will definitely take your advice into consideration. :)
Dec 17, 2012 -
Re: Untitled for now
Thanks for the review Shadow! I really appreciate it and will edit my work soon.
Dec 17, 2012 -
Re: Soulless- Preface
Hey Dark! I've never been able to figure out how to quote a post when reviewing, do you mind telling me? I'd really appreciate it, thanks :)
Dec 3, 2012 -
Re: Adaar Chapter 1
I really liked this chapter, but there are a couple of mistakes. "does my parents ever light candles" I would change the "does" to "do" Also, your story is lacking ...
Dec 2, 2012 -
Re: Tears of Blood
lol. Does this have to do with The Mentalist.
Nov 12, 2012 -
Re: catching clues
"Suzy had no idea who either of them were nor did she what they ever talked about it was always who or what was better." I don't understand this sentence ...
Nov 10, 2012 -
Re: Untitled for now
Thanks for the reviews Aldiv and underaverage, I really appreciate it. Also this is only meant to be part of chapter 1. I wrote it in the description, but it ...
Nov 4, 2012 -
Re: How to Break a Bridge
I really liked this story. It reminded me of something that would be on the twilight zone
Jul 26, 2012