Trident

Chapter B1 Representatives Arthur Darius and Gaius Linus--beloved brother of the Seigneur--navigated the harsh corridors of the Hall of Mannith Tyr. The armies of Seigneur Linus sat outside the city ...

Part IV “Get up, Maurice, get up!” He shuffled around on the straw mattress. The night still shrouded the cell in darkness. “Now!” He got up. “What? What do you ...

Vampirewolf, they stand for "Chapter".

Well, small skirmishes normally do nothing but rack up casualties. That's why the Seigneur wanted them to finally end the small, useless battles by taking the city. And by the ...

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Thanks you two for the comments. And I especially appreciate your professionalism vampirewolf after I had a lot of criticism on your piece. (I suppose that leet at the bottom ...

Right... evidently you don't quite understand what an info-dump is otherwise you would try to take your beginning and do something with it. Perhaps your signature should be changed from ...

Okay, chapters two, three, and four were absolutely amazing. I came into this thinking 'Ok, here we go. I'm going to read three chapters and it's going to take a ...

Try putting spaces in between your paragraphs. ;) Then I'm sure some of us will take the time to read it.

Part III He was walking the corridors of the prison. He had on shoes-- he couldn’t remember the last time he had worn shoes. They scraped against the stone floor. ...

Yeah, you know what? I'm going to change it back. I liked that line too much to change it. It sort of mocks those who think their life is so ...

Well the words are inspirational, and it sounds good. But the word "playdough" is kind of contradictory in this style. It's almost as if it's too silly of a word ...

My apologies, RR, I read the info wrong that I had. They kill and often eat the cubs of other male lions, as Sureal said. Nevertheless, you don't often find ...

I apologize if I came across as... well a bully or a jerk lillizard. Perhaps sarcasm is not the best way to go. Nonetheless, my opinions stand. The first line ...

You know what? You're absolutely right. I tried to see if it was ever used in a case of first person or perhaps even third person formal (in which case ...