TriSARAHtops

Hi, how's about a review? The plot for this story was very interesting. There was a good amount of suspense, and the pacing was excellent. The 'reveal' at the end ...

Just like the prologue (and chapter 1 which I read but didn't review), this is very well written and it is clear that you have taken the time to really ...

Well, there's a cliffhanger! :-) I quite enjoyed reading this, however I was put off by how unclear it was regarding the era in which it was set. At first ...

Hi! This was really good. No spelling/grammar errors, at least not that I could see, and you've created a good level of suspense. Pacing is also good, you didn't rush ...

I quite liked this. The descriptions were great, and there was an awesome sense of setting. I'd like to get to know the characters better, even though this is a ...

If I'm going to be honest, that was weird. But not in an entirely bad way. I don't know how I feel about it. However, as I read it, I ...

This is a really fascinating piece, and I found it highly original. I kept reading it because I wanted to know where it was going, and I imagine that I'll ...

The writing in this piece is fantastic. You've created a realistic and engaging voice, and you managed to draw me in right from the first sentence, and I was captivated ...

This is a really nice prologue. The voice suits the genre, and there's some ace imagery and sense of setting in there. You've done a good job setting the scene, ...

Hi! I was quite surprised by the places this went. Everything seemed fairly innocuous at first, and then before I knew it there was C4 involved! I was very impressed ...

This was a sweet, fun kind of story. You had good characters, and I liked how they were young and acted like it, you didn't make the dialogue too advanced ...

I'm even more hooked into this story now, after reading that. Your second chapter is really, really awesome, and I can't wait to read more. Please keep me updated! :-) ...

If you hadn't said that you had written this at 2 at night, I wouldn't have known, because frankly, this piece is good for any time of the say. The ...

Hi! I enjoyed chapter 1, so I thought that I'd read this too, and I've noticed a definite improvement. If you continue at this tate then whoa... the end of ...

This was really good. A pretty good length for a first chapter, and (as far as I could tell) faultless in terms of spelling and grammar. I didn't spot any ...