TriSARAHtops

Heya! Spotted this in the short story section so thought I'd drop by with a (probably a little rusty but we'll try our best) review. I really like the premise ...

Hi Max! Welcome to YWS! All in all, I thought this was a really solid piece of writing. There are a few things I want to quibble about, which I'll ...

Hello! I thought this was a very promising premise for a story, and a very impressive effort considering you only had a day to write it. Generally, I felt like ...

Hi again! I don't have all that much to say about this chapter that isn't just "good job", so this won't be the longest review ever. First of all, I ...

Hey passenger! I was poking around the Novels section and noticed this chapter, so I thought I'd check it out! I went through and had a quick read over the ...

Hi again! In some ways, I thought this chapter was stronger than the second chapter. I didn't find the modern/formal language quite as jarring, which is maybe because I was ...

Hey Noisette! Dropping by with a review! Just a quick heads up: I'm typing this on my phone, so I'm sorry if there are any typos. I haven't read the ...

Hello! Dropping by with a review. I quite enjoyed this little vignette into your character's life. I feel like there are some really interesting foundations for a good short story ...

Hi there Belle! A very belated welcome to the site! I really liked some of the metaphors in this piece. The constant references to space, light and stars were effective ...

Hello there! Tri here with a review! Just a heads up, it's been quite a few months since I last wrote a review, so I might be a touch rusty. ...

Hi again! Fell out of the reviewing habit for a week there, but getting back to it now. Hmm, I'm struggling to think of much to say for this chapter. ...

Me again! Another interesting chapter. Still have no idea how to feel about Rowan, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. Looks like a character with some conflicting layers, and ...

Back again! This'll probably be a shorter review because there's less to say about this chapter because there's, well, less of it. I didn't mind too much that this was ...

Heyo! Here for another review! I thought that this was perhaps the strongest chapter of your story so far. There was more of a sense that you'd gotten comfortable writing ...

Hey again! Let's see if I can complete this review for the end of review day! This was another rather sweet chapter - I hope sweet doesn't sound condescending, because ...